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Happy Nielsen's avatar

I am so glad you let him get out and didn’t leave it on a claustrophobic cliff hanger 😰

Loved the sweet little convo with Kira too 🥹

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Jan does not like to draw things out haha. I have to make him slow down sometimes.

I'm glad you liked the conversation with Kira. We had to move it from earlier in the book for pacing and Jan kept asking where we'd put it back in.

Hylia Corvidae's avatar

Ahhh great chapter, balancing the personal character growth and progression nicely with the active tension going on with the mission