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The Circus Dragon's avatar

Bummer. Family. You love them so much, but you don't always agree, and sometimes it's with the things that really matter T-T This adds another layer to Viktor. It's good!

Also Viktor's pain tolerance and Chai laughing at him about it 🤣🤣🤣 it's such a contrast to the coolness displayed in the previous chapter. I love it :D

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Thanks, I'll tell Jan! Thanks for listening so much at once and commenting.

Chai does not let Viktor exaggerate 😂

The Circus Dragon's avatar

"Dude stop whining and just pierce your ears." 🤣🤣🤣

Hurhur.. sorry for spamming y'all xD

Hylia Corvidae's avatar

I love a main character with complicated family backstory, adds so much realism and familiarity to their actions and behavior elsewhere

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Families are always complicated, right? 😅

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Oct 21, 2025
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Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Thanks for this feedback! Good to hear the edits were worth it 😁. Kira finally returns in Chapter 14.