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willow wolfe's avatar

ohhhh. i am so glad im starting this/catching up! i have so many questions already, im stoked for this!

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Sooo many questions in this mystery. 😅 Thanks for reading!

Sapna's avatar

I had goosebumps when he saw the footprints and then they suddenly disappeared.

Jan Herrington's avatar

Me too. Wait until you figure out what they represent.

DW Davis's avatar

Vivid imagery. Strong emotional hook. Great start.

The Circus Dragon's avatar

I'm listening to this over on Spotify. Jumping back on here to comment xD This was a intriguing beginning. The mystery of it, twisted together with the supernatural. I'm now at chapter 10 :D

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Oh wow, thanks for listening and commenting. Chapter 10 is a big one.

The Circus Dragon's avatar

Okay don't say anything. I am at it, not completed xD

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Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Thanks! Jan writes pretty surreal sometimes. I try to emphasize it when editing.