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Hallie Jules's avatar

Your mom… haha

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

I’m surprised it took her this long to throw one in 😂. Her instincts were right about the earwigs though.

The Circus Dragon's avatar

Dark gives cosy depth.

Also I like your earwig tech :o gross, and I probably would not use it myself, but super cool!

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Yeah, I like the cozy layers. Like a dark chocolate cookie dipped in white chocolate.

Earwigs are gross 🤢 and it shows up soon in The Flucks 😁. I’d wear them though, probably just takes a little bit to get used to, I hope.

The Circus Dragon's avatar

Why’d you have to call them Earwigs x_x it makes it worse. LOL but I suppose that was your intended effect xD

Mmmm chocolate layers. I think about painting. If it’s all light and no shadows it looks amateur. Adding shadows and knowing how they fall gives depth, makes the piece more realistic.

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

I absolutely did it for effect. Could you imagine “Apple Earwigs”. Terrible branding 😂

Exactly. Contrast!

The Circus Dragon's avatar

… so so bad…….

Mac Sitko's avatar

Yeah I've not read part 1 first but this is gold.

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Thank you! All three parts are posted now and it’s over 😭

Bea's avatar

This is such a cute and fun read lol loved every minute. 🖤

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Thanks so much! I don’t know how I managed to write something cute 😅

Hylia Corvidae's avatar

Ahh I’m so happy this is a little mini series, they’re so much fun to read together

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Thank you! I’m really going to miss Chuq 😭

Happy Nielsen's avatar

Yessss part 3

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Crap. That means I have to write it and stop procrastinating.

Tamsin G.'s avatar

Bahahaha. loved this! ☺️

Ed the non-Editor's avatar

Thanks! I hope it didn't fall out of the cozy-zone too much.

Tamsin G.'s avatar

I think it fits well enough! 😌

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Ed the non-Editor's avatar

It really does just seep in out of nowhere.

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Dec 25
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Ed the non-Editor's avatar

I guess my friendship goal is witty banter 😅😂. It’s interesting making sure they have distinct personalities and different weirdness that gels.

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Dec 25
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Ed the non-Editor's avatar

You're foreshadowing part 3 😅

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Oh, also friendship goal: shenanigans